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内容包括:1.申请原因;2.自我优势;3.希望获准

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【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华,你在网上看到你所在城市的一个英语培训中心拟招收暑期助教,请根据以下要点写一封英语申请信。

内容包括:1.申请原因;

2.自我优势(口语能力,组织能力,沟通能力);

3.希望获准。

注意:1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:助教 teaching assistant

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. ______________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m glad to see your advertisement on the Internet. Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position.

In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself. Devoted to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English. Besides, being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer, which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently. Most importantly, many of my teachers describe me as “responsible and diligent,” and I believe these good qualities contribute to cooperate well in a team.

I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析:假如你是李华,你在网上看到你所在城市的一个英语培训中心拟招收暑期助教,请根据以下要点写一封英语申请信。内容包括:1.申请原因;2.自我优势(口语能力,组织能力,沟通能力);3.希望获准。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右: 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】Willing to be a teaching assistant in your training center this summer, I’m writing to apply for the position.现在分词做原因状语;In order to gain some valuable working experience, I want to seize this opportunity to improve myself.动词不定式做目的状语;Devoted to learning English for years, I think I’m equal to the job because I am capable of communicating with foreigners in English.过去分词做原因状语,并和原因状语从句在同一复合句中;Besides, being a monitor in my class makes me a brilliant organizer, which helps me accumulate many strategies on how to coach others efficiently.动名词短语作主语,同时句中还用了非限制性定语从句;I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.含条件句的固定句式;另外,Besides, Most importantly,的运用,显得文章层次分明,上下线接紧凑。

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